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Kindergarten, grade school, junior high, high school. Beneath desks, between tables, curled up on the bus. Center front in school portraits, center forward in soccer, fastest sprinter in the game but too often mowed down.
This week, though I'm much more substantial, I find that I speak too quietly, and too infrequently. Just this week, I lost four pounds.
Labels: dainty, substantial
posted by 
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In each eye there is an apple/ Buried there before the eye/ And out of sockets come the branches/ And from the branches dangle I ❦ Will Oldham, “God’s Small Song”
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6 Comments:
The sentence rhythms fall apart as soon as I introduce the first person. Will post the revision (maybe tonight?).
Toniiight, toooniiight, won't be like any niiiight, dooo doo dee doo dee doo dee dummmmmm.
8:58 AM
There, revised.
9:14 AM
darling,
you are first person.
i'm going to do as you write, given four pounds could be lost off me.
did you take your bath? tell me that is where the pounds fell off.
4:57 PM
How did you loose four pounds and will you find them again???
4:46 AM
this was last week before last week.
7:41 PM
it's JULY dear dainty substantial.
xo
8:53 PM
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